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| gut. dann solltest du noch beachten, dass verben in der dritten person einzahl im präsens ein s am ende haben. |
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:oops:Du hattest recht ich habs falsche wieder hier rein DANKE jetzt sind die fehler draußen aber die andern bleiben
1) The US government tighten the security after the 9/11 attacks.
2) The security is old and so the US want to improve the measures. These measures are to control the immigrants who come into the US.
3) some organization and institutions have more problems than universities.
4) To keep freedom in the world people have to work together. For example the different government in the different countries.
5) These work that the government from different countries work together is not normal but very important for the future.
6) Recently the French interior minister said it is very bad that more Beninese doctors live in France than in their countries of origin.
7) In my opinion it is right because this situation is not good.
The new law makes that situation worse because it support bright immigrants to come legally to France.
9) Sarakozy don't want that people who have a good education leave Senegal.
10) Wade said that he don't want to lose many bright people to France because he gives huge sums for education.
11) Further he said that the new laws aren't good for countries which need money for their development.
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ja ich weis HE/SHE /IT da S muss mit  aber ich hab extra nochmal nachgeschaut aber ich finds nicht wo ich es vergessen hab.
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| Verfasst am: 25 Feb 2007 - 17:18:38 Titel: Ahhh |
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würde gerne wissen ob der satz so okay is
Since she got to know to Frank and with that got the chance of another life far away from her family, she realised that the place were she had been all her life long is the place were she will belonging to for the rest of her life.
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| were/where ? |
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Since having gotten to know Frank, and having had the opportunity to live another life far away from her family, she realized that the place where she had spent her whole life would be the same place where she would spend the rest of it.
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| Verfasst am: 26 Feb 2007 - 21:33:04 Titel: korriegieren bitte |
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There is absolutely no doubt that ...
Humans need to dream. Some people remember their dreams.
To stop dreaming can you if you move or if you looking at things.
We don´t really know if we dream in colour or black and white.
The other theorie is that we dream in colour but we don´t remember.
The proportion is that 20% spend dreaming , 50% new born babies |
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Ich hab das jetzt anders geschrieben:
There is absolutely no doubt that humans need to dream. Some people remember their dreams but some forget them. We don´t really know if we dream in colour or black and white. One theory is that we dream 2/3 black and white and 1/3 in colour. The other theory is that we dream in colour but we don´t remember them. You can stop people from dreaming when you see their eyes moving rapidly like they are looking at something. 50% of the sleeping time of young people is spent with dreaming. Adults are need dream 25% of the sleeping time. |
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You can stop people from dreaming when you see their eyes moving rapidly like they are looking at something.
Stop people? Kriegt keinen Sinn.
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My dream:
I have a dream about taking an examination.
I was on my bed and wrote my german test. I had to write the test on my bed. The teacher was my mother. I was very sad because I didnt know what I should write on my exercise book. Beside me was my cousin, who had also to write this examination. She was more quickly and finished with writing. She gave her test to my mother. I wanted a help from her, but she didnt help me. I wrote quickly something. Finally my mother remembered that the time was over and I should have to give her my test and she gave the test to my correct german teacher, wo had to correct our test. |
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EINE STUDIE VON UNSERER KLASSE:
11 students of my class do dream in colour and nobody dreams in black and white. 5 students dream both.
Surprisingly only one person do usually remember 5 dreams in a night. The others remember 10 dreams.
5 people like small proportion of their dream and 10 like large proportion.
Interestingly 14 students think that dreams have function or purpose and just 2 of them think that they dont have any function.
Interestingly all students of my class ever have recurring dreams and "action-replay" dreams, i.e. dreams related to what is happening in your everyday life.
Half of the class can influnece their dreams and the others will themselves to dream something in particular.
Just one person dont find himself dreaming, but yet conscious of the fact that he she are dreaming.
Half of the students have drams that they return in their dreams which are familiar and yet which dont exist in reality.
10 of my classmates think that dreams can predict the future and 10 of them think that they get messages in their dreams, such as warnings or advice.
just 3 person think that they dream 5 minutes, 9 person dream 10 minutes and 4 person more than 10 minutes.
All students usually dream about pople and places they know and sometimes people and places they dont know.
All students do ever integrate into their dreams things going on in the real world arout them e.g. aloud noise.
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Kurze Tipps erstmal:
1. Lass mal den Spellcheck drüber laufen (http://www.spellcheck.net/)
2. Wie in den vorherigen Postings in diesm Thread: "He, she, it..." (geh zurück wenn du nicht weißt was jetzt kommt)
3. "the others will themselves to dream something in particular"??? Ich versteh nicht ganz, was du meinst... |
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Ja hallo. Es würde mich freuen wenn jemand diesen Text verbessern könnte. Danke schon jetzt.
Mark was new at school. He got a lot of friends in a short time. One day he went to school, but his friends turned their backs and pretended he didn’t exist. He felt that he was the least. This day was horrible for him, because nobody spoke with him. He felt bed, because he didn’t know, why they didn’t speak with him. He thought that they he was an underdog, because his financial situation wasn’t so good. Next day he went to school. This day was better, his friends spread rumors about him and they insulted his look and his clothes. He got very unhappy. In the evening he went in a bar, when he entered the bar there wasn’t somebody. He began to cry, but nobody answered. Then he went in the party room and he was surprised that all his friends were there. They wanted to surprise him, because this day was the anniversary that he frequented the school. He felt very good now and got very happy. He threw back his head and began to lough. |
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| Verfasst am: 05 März 2007 - 15:28:43 Titel: Re: Crazy week |
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| zwerghouse hat folgendes geschrieben: |
Ja hallo. Es würde mich freuen wenn jemand diesen Text verbessern könnte. Danke schon jetzt.
Mark was new at school. He made a lot of friends in a short time. One day he went to school, but his friends turned their backs and pretended he didn’t exist. He felt that he was the least. This day was horrible for him, because nobody spoke with him. He felt bed ?????????????, because he didn’t know, why they didn’t speak with him. He thought that they he was an underdog, because his financial situation wasn’t so good. Next day he went to school. This day was better, his friends spread rumors about him and they insulted his look and his clothes. He got very unhappy. In the evening he went in a bar, when he entered the bar there wasn’t somebody. He began to cry, but nobody answered. Then he went in the party room and he was surprised that all his friends were there. They wanted to surprise him, because this day was the anniversary that he frequented the school. He felt very good now and got very happy. He threw back his head and began to lough. |
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| zwerghouse hat folgendes geschrieben: |
| Mark was new at school. He got a lot of friends in a short time. One day he went to school, but his friends turned their backs and pretended he didn’t exist. He felt that he was the least. This day was horrible for him, because nobody spoke with him. He felt bed, because he didn’t know, why they didn’t speak with him. He thought that they he was an underdog, because his financial situation wasn’t so good. Next day he went to school. This day was better, his friends spread rumors about him and they insulted his look and his clothes. He got very unhappy. In the evening he went in a bar, when he entered the bar there wasn’t somebody. He began to cry, but nobody answered. Then he went in the party room and he was surprised that all his friends were there. They wanted to surprise him, because this day was the anniversary that he frequented the school. He felt very good now and got very happy. He threw back his head and began to lough. |
für 100%ige fehlerfreiheit kann ich nicht garantieren..
Mark was new at school. He got a lot of friends in a short time. One day he went to school, but his friends turned their backs and pretended he didn’t exist. He felt that he was the least. *) This day was horrible for him, because nobody spoke to him. He felt bad, because he didn’t know why they didn’t speak with him. He thought (better: felt) he was an underdog, because his financial situation wasn’t so good. The next day in school was better (meinst du nicht eher worse?), his friends spread rumors about him and they insulted his look and his clothes (maybe better: "insulted him because of the way he looked", "made fun of his look and.."). He became very unhappy. In the evening he went to a bar, but when he entered nobody was there. He began to cry, but nobody answered. Then he went inside/ into the party room and he was surprised that all his friends were there. They wanted to surprise him, because this day was the anniversary of that he attended the school. He felt very good now and was very happy. He threw his head back and began to laugh.
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what's wrong with a little destruction?
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this day was the anniversary of that he attended the school
das egth so nicht. |
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| weaver hat folgendes geschrieben: |
this day was the anniversary of that he attended the school
das egth so nicht. |
-of (übersehen) wollte eigentlich "(...)of him attending the school", was doch gehen müsste, schreiben. oder auch "(...)of when he attended the school"
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what's wrong with a little destruction?
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| schulbescuh ist was längeres. davon kann es keinen jahrestag geben. |
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| weaver hat folgendes geschrieben: |
| schulbescuh ist was längeres. davon kann es keinen jahrestag geben. |
naja, wieso denn nicht? seitdem er eben auf diese schule gewechselt ist, ist ein jahr vergangen.
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what's wrong with a little destruction?
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Hallo könntet ihr den absatz mal auf fehler untersuchen? ich hab wohl einiges bei den zeiten falsch und ein paar vokabeln auch falsch verwendet. wäre euch wirklich dankbar dafür *anfleh*
I looked at Rufus. „What do you mean with „She's at hospital?““
He gazed at the ground, avoiding my glances. „Elena..uhm..she was founded by a passanger in a Sidestreet in Midgar - lying on the ground, injured to the head ...and passed out. Somebody had attacked her..The men thought she was dead“
My trachea was corded up, I could hardly breathe.“How is she now?“, I wanted to ask, but Rufus interrupted me before I was able to finish the sentence.
„She's in a coma“
I cried the whole night. Reno, Tseng, Rude and I had tried to visit Elena in her room at the infirmary, but nobody had given us the permission to go to her. I had to left the hospital without seeing my best friend, without beeing at her side, without taking care of her. I was desperate. I didn't know what to do now, so I went back to the agency of Shinra and there, I saw the empty chair of Elena und I just couldn't unterstand why this had happen. |
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My trachea was corded up.
haaaahaaaahaaaaaaaaaa 
Tut mir Leid, aber 'trachea' ist also ein Fachbegriff, der im literarischen Prosa nicht gehört.
'my throat tightened' wäre besser.
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'founded by a passenger...'
'to find' und 'to found' sind zwei verschiedene Verben.
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| phine hat folgendes geschrieben: |
| weaver hat folgendes geschrieben: |
| schulbescuh ist was längeres. davon kann es keinen jahrestag geben. |
naja, wieso denn nicht? seitdem er eben auf diese schule gewechselt ist, ist ein jahr vergangen. |
auf die schule wechseln = 1 tag >> jahrestag möglich
auf die schule gehen = jahre >>> jahrestag nicht möglich.
klar? |
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| weaver hat folgendes geschrieben: |
| phine hat folgendes geschrieben: |
| weaver hat folgendes geschrieben: |
| schulbescuh ist was längeres. davon kann es keinen jahrestag geben. |
naja, wieso denn nicht? seitdem er eben auf diese schule gewechselt ist, ist ein jahr vergangen. |
auf die schule wechseln = 1 tag >> jahrestag möglich
auf die schule gehen = jahre >>> jahrestag nicht möglich.
klar? |
aber ein schulwechsel ist eben nicht was längeres  sondern passiert nur einmal und meist irgendwann mitten im schuljahr (der "neue")
| wikipedia.com hat folgendes geschrieben: |
| An anniversary (from the Latin anniversarius, from the words for year and to turn, meaning (re)turning yearly; known in English since c. 1230) is a day that commemorates and/or celebrates a past event that occurred on the same day of the year as the initial event. For example, the first event is the initial occurrence or, if planned, the inaugural of the event. One year later would be the first anniversary of that event. |
es würde theoretisch gehen find ich, auch wenn's nicht sooo stilvoll ist. aber du kannst jedes für dich persönlich wichtige ereignis im grunde "anniversary" nennen. der tag, an dem man in ein anderes land zog, seine eigene band gründete, heiratete usw. - also eine art persönlicher gedenktag
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| phine hat folgendes geschrieben: |
| weaver hat folgendes geschrieben: |
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| weaver hat folgendes geschrieben: |
| schulbescuh ist was längeres. davon kann es keinen jahrestag geben. |
naja, wieso denn nicht? seitdem er eben auf diese schule gewechselt ist, ist ein jahr vergangen. |
auf die schule wechseln = 1 tag >> jahrestag möglich
auf die schule gehen = jahre >>> jahrestag nicht möglich.
klar? |
aber ein schulwechsel ist eben nicht was längeres |
sag ich ja. |
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 was wolltest du denn dann von mir siehe seite 8
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| phine hat folgendes geschrieben: |
| was wolltest du denn dann von mir |
von dir wollte ich nix. wollte dir nur helfen, einen fehler zu beseitigen. |
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| weaver hat folgendes geschrieben: |
| phine hat folgendes geschrieben: |
| was wolltest du denn dann von mir |
von dir wollte ich nix. wollte dir nur helfen, einen fehler zu beseitigen. |
we3chen denn
g3a4b da hast d4 etwas 05ssverstanden. d4 verw5rrst 05ch...
nebenbe5 f5nd 5chs gany 34st5g, dass 0e5ne tastat4r v+335g versch6ben 5st 4nd das h5er n5e0and w5r235ch 3esen 2ann.
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| s.o. |
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| weaver hat folgendes geschrieben: |
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ne, komm mir nicht so.. ich hatte nur vergessen ein 'of' wegzumachen..
das mit der anniversary hast du falsch verstanden. ich meinte nie etwas anderes  - du hast behauptet, dass es nicht geht und nicht ich.
ich schrieb außerdem "the school" und nicht "school", womit klar war, dass diese schule, auf die er gewechselt war, gemeint war und nicht der eintritt in die schule an sich.
(hach, meine tastatur funzt wieder ^^)
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| phine hat folgendes geschrieben: |
| weaver hat folgendes geschrieben: |
| phine hat folgendes geschrieben: |
| was wolltest du denn dann von mir |
von dir wollte ich nix. wollte dir nur helfen, einen fehler zu beseitigen. |
we3chen denn
g3a4b da hast d4 etwas 05ssverstanden. d4 verw5rrst 05ch...
nebenbe5 f5nd 5chs gany 34st5g, dass 0e5ne tastat4r v+335g versch6ben 5st 4nd das h5er n5e0and w5r235ch 3esen 2ann. |
r0f1 w|-|ut r u g3++3n 411 1337-5p33|< 0n u5 4?
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I think exchange visits are very good and helpful. I would gladly go on an exchange visit for example to London or maybe Canada.
I was already in America for three months and I learnt english very fast.I think when you go on an exchange visit you can learn new people,new lifestyle and different culture. You can see some new things like mountains or ocean or something else. The best thing of exchange visits is the language. You learn it very fast,because you speak every day in english and you have contact with english people,that's better than english lesson four times a week. And another good thing of exchange visit is that you get away from parents it is a little bit like holidays.
Kann es jemand BITTE korrigieren? |
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| Ich brauche das dringend,das dauert doch nicht lange es zu korrigieren! |
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| english schreibt man groß. Korrigier das mal. Dauert nicht lange. |
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@Zwanglos:
*lol* couldn't decode the middle - only rofl what are you --- on us for? or something ;D
thought it was quite funny when my keyboard started going apeshit all of a sudden. ^^
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birtanecik
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sind diese sätze richtig oder falsch , achten sie besonders auf die unterstrichenen bitte...
 In spite of, Carlier was an officer and Kayerts worked as an telegraph administrator.
They fail on mistrusting each other.
Guy is different than the other person because he adopts the native behavior.
Lastly,you can see the differences and the similarities of the three stories.
He gets three half-castes children.
The Carruthers's don't "going native".
Doris doesn't lose their identity.
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ich habe noch diese sätze.
She abandons Guy's former relation with a Malay women.
In the place ... are only three houses.
The open half-empty boxes and old boots show the unefficient of Kayerts and Carlier. |
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ElenaFl
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| Verfasst am: 13 März 2007 - 19:52:38 Titel: |
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1) In spite of ... erfordert ein Objekt - everything zum Beispiel.
2) klingt etwas komisch, ich bin da nicht sicher
3) different steht mit from
4)
5) half-castes - half-caste
6) hier fehlt mir der Kontext, könnte man wohl so sagen, wenn das ein original Zitat ist, wenn nicht ist es komisch
7) her identity - sie ist eine Frau, nicht mehrere Personen
 weiß ich nicht
9) there are
10) inefficiency of - wie meinst du den Satz? |
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weaver
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| Verfasst am: 14 März 2007 - 12:14:11 Titel: |
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| nach do/did/does immer der infinitiv |
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birtanecik
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| Verfasst am: 14 März 2007 - 13:32:23 Titel: |
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das hat mir sehr geholfen, das ist ganz lieb von euch danke sehr...
bis nächstes mal ! |
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birtanecik
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| Verfasst am: 14 März 2007 - 14:29:04 Titel: |
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hallo , kann ich folgendes sagen:
They fail because of mistrusting each other.
They fail, mistrusting each other.
They fail, on mistrusting.
They fail, like the others. |
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weaver
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| Verfasst am: 15 März 2007 - 19:55:32 Titel: |
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| das dritte geht nicht. der erst is ok, je nach zusammenhang aber. |
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Zwanglos
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| Verfasst am: 19 März 2007 - 15:25:30 Titel: |
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Ich wuerde sagen:
"They fail because they mistrust each other" or
"They fail because they mistrust one another" or
"They fail because they distrust each other"
usw ...
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Slunch
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| Verfasst am: 19 März 2007 - 23:16:09 Titel: My Own Text..bitte korrigieren! |
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It was a sunny summerdas morning two years ago. I was 15 years and had many social problems with my dad. I couldn´t handle this problem, so it was very hard to me to stay still at home. In this wayI left my sweet home and traveled to a strengh, because I looked like a foreigner. Somebody who didn´t live there. I was very different as the people in the city. As soon as darkness appeared, I looked but didn´t find a sleeping place for me, because it was dirty in every corner of the streets. I was very desperate and didn´t know what to do. Finally the poöicecame to my mind, so suddenly I found a telephone booth and tried to dail the police number, but it wasn´t correct. At the end I realized that I made a mistake and went back home.
Wäre echt nett, wenn mir jemand den kurzen text hier korrigieren könnte....wäre wirklich besser wenn mehrere es tun, da man ja vielleicht den einen oder anderen Fehler übersehen könnte.....
PS: Mein Englisch ist ziemlich langweilig und mach echt häufig Fehler...will dies unbedingt verbessen...Tipps von euch wären auch ganz cool |
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weaver
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| Verfasst am: 20 März 2007 - 14:24:34 Titel: |
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| gib den text mal bei spellcheck.net ein, dann findest du schon ein paar fehler.- korrighier die mal und dann poste es hier noch einmal. |
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christo1984
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| Verfasst am: 20 März 2007 - 16:24:02 Titel: Coment Internet |
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kann mal jemand meine englische Übersetzung was ich geschrieben habe koriegieren bzw verbessern. Das wäre echt nett
1. Es gibt gibt Argumente auf beiden Seiten. Wie auch immer, meiner Meinung nach ist das Internet im Grunde ein hervorragendes und eine schlechte Sache für die Welt
2 Es existieren viele Vorteile und einige Nachteile für das Internet.
3. Ein Nachteil z.B. im Internet existieren Websiten welche pornografische Fotos enthalten und diese sind nicht gut für Kinder.
4 Das ist eine schlechte Erziehung und eine Ursache für die Kriminalität
5. Dies war nicht die Idee vom erziehrerischen Zweck.
6 Unter andern kann das Internet auch süchtig machen.
7.Viele junge Leute verbringen ein großteil Ihrer Freizeit vor den Computer.
8.Das ist nicht gut für Ihre Entwicklung und für sie sozialen Kontakte, wobei ich mich da nicht unbedingt ausschließe.
9.Desweiteren sollte man es unterlassen irgendwelche Filme von sich ins Internet zu setzen (stellen) da dies Folgen haben könnte z.B. wenn der Englisch Lehrer immer wieder schlechte Witze darüber macht.
10. Viele Leute sagen das Internet ist ein schlechtes Monster
11. Denoch hat das Internet auch viele Vorteile.
12. Die meisten Leute in Europa haben ein Computer zu Hause und benutzen ihn jeden Tag.
13. Man kann viele Sachen mit den Computer machen
14. Das Internet ist absolut wichtig für viele Leute.
15 Durch das Internet stehen viele Leute in Kontakt zu Hause und im Exil
16 Für viele Leute ist das Internet die beste Informationsquelle in der Welt
17. Man kann viele Informatonen finden und alle Leute die Internet haben können miteinander schreiben.
18 Ich schaue oft auf eine Musikseite im Internet www.musiccommity-sachsenanhalt.de wo ich mich über regionale Musik informiere.
19 Das ist ein regionales Forum wo einige Bands aus Sachsen- Anhalt vertreten sind um sich vorzustellen.
20. Ich finde die Idee der Hompage sehr gut.
21. Diese Community präsentiert demnächst im Zusammenarbeit mit den Goitscheradio eine Compilation.
22. Der Name der Compilation ist "Mom found this CD".
23.Außerdem kann man sich im Internet Filme, Musik und andere Dinge runterladen.
24. Ich höre mir viel Musik im www an z.B Pop, Rock und Metal ( Heavy Metal, Trash Metal. Black Metal, Metalcore and Powermetal)
in Englisch:
1. There are arguments on both sides. However, in my oppinion the internet is bassically an excellent and a terrible thing for the world.
2. It exist many advantage and some disadvantage for the world wide web.
2. The disadvantage is at example in the internet exist a website which contain pornographic pictures and this is not good for the children.
4. This is a bad education and cause for crime
5. This was not the idea of "educational" purposes.
6. The internet cam make addicted.
7. Many young people spend a mostly her free time in front of of the computer.
8. This is not good for her evolution and for the social contact, when I me not absolute ( unconditional) lock out.
9. In addition you can should to refrain from oneself in the internet, yet this can have successions, at example when the English teacher make across badly joke.
10. Many people say the internet is a terible monster.
11. Neverthesless has the internet many advantage.
12. The most people in Europe have a computer at home and use the computer every day.
13. You can make many things with the computer.
14. The internet is absolutely essential for people.
15 Through the internet stay many peple in contakt, at home and in exile.
16. Many peple say it is the best information source in the world.
17. You find some information and all people which have internet can chat with other people.
18. I look oft on the music website in the internet www.musiccommunity-sachsenanhalt.de , where I inform me over regional music.
19. That is a regional forum where some bands from bands from Sachsen- Anhalt suggest oneself and her music.
20. I find the idea from the homepage very good.
21. This community represents soon in coperation with Goitzsche radio a compilation.
22. The name from this compilation is " Mom found this CD"
23. Also you can in the internet downloading films, music and other things.
24. I hear many music in the internet at examole pop, rock or metal ( heavy metal, trash metal. black metal, metalcore and powermetal) |
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krautsalat
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| Verfasst am: 24 März 2008 - 09:59:13 Titel: |
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Verbesserung:
Elaine Robinson: Elaine's reaction at first seems a bit strange, but in the end I could understand her reactions and retrace some of her feelings.
Mrs Robinson: Personally I think Mrs Robinson is a crazy woman who only acts in her own interest. She doesn’t think about the consequences of her actions. This behaviour makes her unappealing in my view.
Mr Braddock: Mr Braddock is worried about Ben's future and tries to understand what Ben really wants to do. His behaviour is typical for a father that cares about the future of his son.
Tipp:
Du solltest dir bevor du anfängst etwas auf Englisch zu schreiben im Klaren sein, was du überhaupt schreiben willst... |
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MissAnonymus
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| Verfasst am: 09 Apr 2009 - 15:16:57 Titel: |
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Hallo! 
Ich hab nur ne kurze Frage:
Heißt es "a presentation on the visitor´s day", oder "a presentation on visitor´s day"? (Mit "visitor´s day" meine ich "Tag der offenen Tür")
Danke schon Mal! |
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