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BeitragVerfasst am: 19 Feb 2007 - 13:11:24    Titel:

gut. dann solltest du noch beachten, dass verben in der dritten person einzahl im präsens ein s am ende haben.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 19 Feb 2007 - 13:12:38    Titel:

:oops:Du hattest recht ich habs falsche wieder hier rein DANKE jetzt sind die fehler draußen aber die andern bleiben




1) The US government tighten the security after the 9/11 attacks.

2) The security is old and so the US want to improve the measures. These measures are to control the immigrants who come into the US.

3) some organization and institutions have more problems than universities.

4) To keep freedom in the world people have to work together. For example the different government in the different countries.

5) These work that the government from different countries work together is not normal but very important for the future.

6) Recently the French interior minister said it is very bad that more Beninese doctors live in France than in their countries of origin.

7) In my opinion it is right because this situation is not good.

The new law makes that situation worse because it support bright immigrants to come legally to France.

9) Sarakozy don't want that people who have a good education leave Senegal.

10) Wade said that he don't want to lose many bright people to France because he gives huge sums for education.

11) Further he said that the new laws aren't good for countries which need money for their development.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 19 Feb 2007 - 13:16:57    Titel:

ja ich weis HE/SHE /IT da S muss mit Very Happy aber ich hab extra nochmal nachgeschaut aber ich finds nicht wo ich es vergessen hab.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 19 Feb 2007 - 13:40:36    Titel:

he don't
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BeitragVerfasst am: 25 Feb 2007 - 17:18:38    Titel: Ahhh

würde gerne wissen ob der satz so okay is


Since she got to know to Frank and with that got the chance of another life far away from her family, she realised that the place were she had been all her life long is the place were she will belonging to for the rest of her life.


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BeitragVerfasst am: 25 Feb 2007 - 18:35:08    Titel:

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BeitragVerfasst am: 25 Feb 2007 - 18:36:26    Titel:

Since having gotten to know Frank, and having had the opportunity to live another life far away from her family, she realized that the place where she had spent her whole life would be the same place where she would spend the rest of it.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 26 Feb 2007 - 21:33:04    Titel: korriegieren bitte

There is absolutely no doubt that ...
Humans need to dream. Some people remember their dreams.
To stop dreaming can you if you move or if you looking at things.
We don´t really know if we dream in colour or black and white.
The other theorie is that we dream in colour but we don´t remember.
The proportion is that 20% spend dreaming , 50% new born babies
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BeitragVerfasst am: 27 Feb 2007 - 14:31:32    Titel: korr. bitte

Ich hab das jetzt anders geschrieben:

There is absolutely no doubt that humans need to dream. Some people remember their dreams but some forget them. We don´t really know if we dream in colour or black and white. One theory is that we dream 2/3 black and white and 1/3 in colour. The other theory is that we dream in colour but we don´t remember them. You can stop people from dreaming when you see their eyes moving rapidly like they are looking at something. 50% of the sleeping time of young people is spent with dreaming. Adults are need dream 25% of the sleeping time.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 24 März 2008 - 09:59:13    Titel:

Verbesserung:

Elaine Robinson: Elaine's reaction at first seems a bit strange, but in the end I could understand her reactions and retrace some of her feelings.

Mrs Robinson: Personally I think Mrs Robinson is a crazy woman who only acts in her own interest. She doesn’t think about the consequences of her actions. This behaviour makes her unappealing in my view.

Mr Braddock: Mr Braddock is worried about Ben's future and tries to understand what Ben really wants to do. His behaviour is typical for a father that cares about the future of his son.

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