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BeitragVerfasst am: 28 Dez 2008 - 15:46:21    Titel:

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Der jüdische Friedhof Königstraße ist gewiss eine Besonderheit. Deshalb fordern Wissenschaftler seit vielen Jahren seine Aufnahme in das Weltkulturerbe der UNESCO, zusammen mit den anderen einzigartigen jüdischen Begräbnisstätten Ouderkerk (Amsterdam) und Curacao.

The Jewish cemetery Königstraße is of course (besser: certainly) (a speciality) something special. Therefore academics have asked(auch: demanded) for many years for the acceptance into the World Cultural Heritage of UNESCO, (together) along with the other unique Jewish cemeteries Ouderkerk (Amsterdam) and Curacao.


Mein Vorschlag.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 28 Dez 2008 - 15:51:22    Titel:

Darf ich?...

"Curaçao" wird mit Cédille geschrieben.

ç = ALT+ 135
Ç = ALT+ 128

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BeitragVerfasst am: 28 Dez 2008 - 16:06:27    Titel:

vielen Dank!!! das ging ja schnell. ja, mir ist schon klar, dass es so geschrieben wird. Aber danke für die Tastenkombination.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 28 Dez 2008 - 16:41:52    Titel:

lefroy hat folgendes geschrieben:
Hi!
Kann mal jemand nachschauen ob meine Übersetzung richtig ist. Wäre echt toll. Danke schon im Voraus!


Der jüdische Friedhof Königstraße ist gewiss eine Besonderheit. Deshalb fordern Wissenschaftler seit vielen Jahren seine Aufnahme in das Weltkulturerbe der UNESCO, zusammen mit den anderen einzigartigen jüdischen Begräbnisstätten Ouderkerk (Amsterdam) und Curacao.

The Jewish cemetery Königstraße is of course a speciality. Therefore academics asking for many years for the acceptance into the World Cultural Heritage of UNESCO, together with the other unique Jewish cemetery Ouderkerk (Amsterdam) and Curacao. [/i]


'landmark' statt 'speciality'.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 29 Dez 2008 - 18:12:23    Titel:

Wäre nett , wenn da mal jmd. drübergucken könnte:

In Al Gore's documentary “An inconvenient Truth” about the dangers of climate change he tries to make people aware of the problem of global warming.
Shortly after Al Gore had lost the US elections in 2000 something totally unexpected happened: He went on tour with a mixture of scientific facts, cartoons and one man show in order to advise against global warming.
Now Davis Guggenheim, a famous director, turned the show into a movie. He produced the documentary in a very reserved way and allows Al Gore to present his multimedia show freely.

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BeitragVerfasst am: 29 Dez 2008 - 20:14:58    Titel:

Hey!
Könnt ihr mir nochmals helfen. wäre echt toll.


Doch noch viel interessanter in ihrer Gestaltung, sind die sefardischen Grabsteine. Hier ist auch die Vielfalt und die Kreativität der Grabkunst viel mehr ausgeprägt, als auf dem aschkenasischen Teil des Friedhofs.

Der erste Unterschied zwischen den Grabsteinen, denn man bemerkt ist wirklich der, dass die sefardischen Grabsteine liegende Steine sind, während die aschkenasischen Steine stehen. Aber auch bei den sefardischen Steinen merkt man manchmal einen Unterschied zwischen den Grabsteinen. Es gibt die einfachen Platten und auch die sogenannten „Zelte“, die teurer gewesen sind.


But more interesting in their composition are the Sephardic gravestones. Here is the diversity and the creativity of the grave art much more chiselled, then on the Sephardic part of the cemetery.

The first difference between the gravestones, because you recognize, that the Sephardic gravestones are laying stones and the Ashkenazic are standing. But also with the Sephardic gravestones you can see a difference between the gravestones. There are the simple tiling and the so-called „marquees“, which were very expensive.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 12 Jan 2009 - 19:43:32    Titel:

Hi ho,
kann mir bitte einer helfen und diesen text korrigieren sind nur 300 wörter Very Happy
Danke im vorraus



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This picture is an advertisement from “Sunglasses Hut” and advert for so many sunglasses that the decision for one of the sunglasses would be very difficult.
The picture is so divided:
The Background is in cream/beige colors. At the top is a text in big letters “MORE THAN 1000 SUNGLASSES.ITS HARD TO DECIDE!” This text is darker than the background. He stands out.
Under the text is a woman. She is very thin. The woman wears a white/cream tunica. Her shoulders are naked. The woman affected very elegant and fine. Her hair is bound to a node. The attention directed alone of the sunglasses.
Everything on the picture is in bright soft colors, only the sunglass is dark. So the sunglass is striking.
The Text, which says that you can´t decide between so many sunglasses, gets support from the picture, because the sunglasses is a combination between two. (One site has dark glass; the other site has bright glass).
The advertisement is especially for young people, because only young women would buy this kind of sunglasses, so they think they look like this woman. Because of the slogan I think a lot of people would go to the shop, because they want to see this fantastic collection and also prove the sense of the slogan.
To my mind I think the advertisement has a good selling strategy to convince the consumer to buy the sunglasses, because they mention that they have sunglasses for everyone.
The designer knows that today the accessories are very important for the majority of the young people, so they developed a lot of new exemplary and show this in their advertisements. It is logical that the most people go to a shop which has a big choice as a shop which only has ten different models.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 13 Jan 2009 - 15:43:05    Titel:

Verfasst am: 13 Jan 2009 - 15:15:49 Titel: Bitte um Korrektur
Hallo, wär echt lieb, wenn ihr mir das kontrollieren könntet, da mein Englisch nicht besonders gut ist =(

Lieben Gruß, Charleen




Holden Caulfield comes from a wealthy family, but he has no particularly close relationship with his parents. He is 16 years old and 1,89 m tall. He is very poor and many gray hairs on his head. He claims to chain themselves to be smokers, and tolerate much alcohol. He adores his younger sister Phoebe, as his deceased brother, Allie. To Phoebe he maintains a very good relationship.

They are among the few people that Holden is not dishonest and wrong would call.
Also, they seem to be the only ones with whom Holden happy talk.
With Allie talks in his imagination, and usually if it goes badly, gives him the power to bullet. He also admires his older brother DB, a talented writer, he also is not often seen, as it is in Hollywood and prostituted. He may not, however, that he
Hollywood is, and writes films. He did not like movies. He described them as fake, dishonest and wrong, just like so many other things. Almost his entire environment so it seems to be. It is clearly noted that Holden in his own world. He has difficulties in adapting to it is also not allow only the "outside world" to approach. He sees himself as an outsider in the world. Holden has a very complicated personality. There is always a big difference between what he does and what he thinks. For example, he holds himself for a poor student, writes in reality, but good articles. He wants to talk to anyone, but with many attempts to contact people to meet with them. He is pleased about trifles and yet it is the most depressed. He hates people who are dishonest, but at the same time, the biggest liar in the world.

It is located in a development and has significant
Difficulties with growing up.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 17 Jan 2009 - 14:16:48    Titel:

Hallo,
wäre echt super, wenn mir jemand meinen Text korregieren könnte!Smile
Das ist ein Auschnitt aus einem Text, den ich selbst in Englsiche übersetzt habe.

By approaching in style, clothing, behaviour of the upper social class, they tried to obscure the disliked point of origin. That expressed the wearing of custom-made suits and expensive brand-name clothing, what from developed by-and-by an individual style of fashion. Influences came besides in stylistic regard from Italy. “The appearance categorical the being”, this is the motto, which basically was valid. Until today the main feature of the Mods are the parka. This is a long, often fed anorak with a hood. The parka was used first by the scooter driving Mods to protect their expensive clothes. In addition, later there were also Mods without scooter who carried parka. Thereby this trend was taken over from a flood of others.In the second Mod wave in the end of the 1970's the Parkas were decorated with patches of bands and events. In addition the Mods preferred short hair, contrary to the Hippie movement. The English fashion-designer Ben Sherman was considered as „God of the Mods“. The most popular headdress of the Mods was the Pork-Pie-Hat.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 25 Feb 2009 - 21:30:27    Titel:

Globalization is deeply controversial, however. Proponents of globalization argue that it allows poor countries and their citizens to develop economically and raise their standards of living, while opponents of globalization claim that the creation of an unfettered international free market has benefited multinational corporations in the Western world at the expense of local enterprises, local cultures, and common people. Resistance to globalization has therefore taken shape both at a popular and at a governmental level as people and governments try to manage the flow of capital, labor, goods, and ideas that constitute the current wave of globalization

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Die Globalisierung ist sehr umstritten, jedoch. Die Befürworter der Globalisierung argumentieren, dass sie die armen Länder und ihre Bürger wirtschaftlich zu entwickeln und ihre Lebensstandards, während die Gegner der Globalisierung behaupten, dass die Schaffung eines freien internationalen freien Markt profitiert hat multinationale Konzerne in der westlichen Welt auf Kosten der lokalen Unternehmen , der lokalen Kulturen, und das gemeine Volk. Der Widerstand gegen die Globalisierung hat daher die Form auf ein beliebtes und zu einem Regierungs-Ebene wie die Menschen und Regierungen versuchen, den Fluss von Kapital, Arbeit, Waren und Ideen, die die derzeitige Welle der Globalisierung
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