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BeitragVerfasst am: 11 März 2014 - 14:03:40    Titel: Motivation letter for studying abroad

Hallo,

kann jemand Fehler finden bzw. mir TIps zum besseren Schreiben geben? Danke Simon

I am a twenty-three year old student of Engineering and Management at University of XXXXXX. I acquired a Bachelor’s degree with distinction from university of XXXXXX and I am now studying for a Master’s degree.
My Interest in Studies at University of PXXXXXX
My studies allow me to take various courses in the field of economics, Business Administration, Finance and Technology. I am especially interested in taking courses in engineering of plastics at University of XXXXXXX. If possible, I am going to write my Master thesis at the institute of polymer technology in Erlangen. In addition, the University of Pittsburgh offers several courses of Business Administration which will be of interest for me.
My skills and abilities
I am a particularly ambitious student and my achievements in studies are above the average. During my Bachelor’s Degree, I took English courses for two years and passed the exams successfully with the best possible mark (1.0). I already prepared for the TOEFL and registered at their website, so I will be able to pass the test in short term.
As I have already spoken to some of my fellow students who lived in the United States for a while, I am familiar with the costs and paperwork needed (Visa, insurance, vaccination, passport, flight and accommodation).
My professional aims
After my Master’s degree, or possibly my doctorate in Engineering, I am going to work for an international company as BASF or Bayer. That is why, besides achieving advanced skills in the English language, I need to get familiar with working in an international working environment.
Besides gaining technical expertise and professional skills, studies abroad may widen my cultural horizons and broaden my personal skills.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 14 Apr 2015 - 17:43:49    Titel:

Hallihallo!
Ich bin gerade auf das Forum gestoßen, da ich jemand gesucht habe, der mal über meinen Englisch Comment drüberlesen könnte. Ich schreibe bald eine Schulaufgabe darüber und bin nicht besonders gut in Englisch, deswegen hoff ich das ihr mir helfen könnt! Embarassed Smile Das Thema ist wearing school un


A lot of people wear uniforms. So it is easier to identify a group of workers. For example the police, firemans, some companies and sometimes pupils, too. In this context it is often discussed if it is usefull or useless. Let's have a look at the advantages and disadvantages.

On the one hand school uniforms could reduce bullying, because a lot of children are harassed for the clothes if they don't wear brand-name clothes. For example every child in the class has the latest style, but one family don't have the money for it and maybe this child would be expelled of the community.

But one the other hand school uniforms are very expensive, because the children mustn't only buy normal clothes but rather need to buy the school uniform, too. And it could be difficult for poor families to finance it.

Furthermore the children aren't allowed to develob theirselves. A lot of children, especally youth, express theirselves in the clothes and if they wear uniforms, this will be not possible and they can develop their style and character complete.

Weighing the pros and cons, I come to the conclusion it is not usefull to get school uniforms. There is no doubt about the fact that school uniform could reduce harassing, but only could and for the cons predominate.

Danke schon mal im Voraus und wenn ihr irgendwelche Tipps habt, wie ich mein Schriftenglisch verbessern kann, immer her damit. Embarassed Wink
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