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BeitragVerfasst am: 05 Apr 2008 - 13:31:43    Titel: Text über Kinderarbeit

Wir haben einen Text über Kinderarbeit angehört und sollen ihn nun selber schreiben und zusammenfassen. Ich hoffe, ihr könnt mir ein bisschen weiter helfen. Hier mein Text:

I want to write about child labour and the day the kids had. I’ll tell you a little story about a boy who lived in this time.
Georgie Smith live 1832 in Halifax, Britan. He was only eight years old, but he must work in the textilindustrie. The working conditions were very bad. Georgie and the other children had to work hard and it was dangerous for them. The factories were dirty and the machines were loud.
Georgie had to work 17 hours each day, so he hadn’t enough time to sleep and he couldn’t spent time with friends. Sometimes he must also work in the night so he missed the light of day.
One day he felt asleep. His master came and beat him up and he kept always a part of wages. Georgie was weak and his father must carry him home. He was also to weak to eat and so Georgie went to bed. He slept until 4 o’clock then he thought that he must go to work. But he can’t. In this moment he died.
This was the short life of the little boy Georgie who always went to work.

Danke, Anne. =)
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BeitragVerfasst am: 05 Apr 2008 - 13:38:57    Titel:

I want to write about child labour and the day the kids had. I’ll tell you the story of a boy who lived in this time.
Georgie Smith lived in Halifax, Britain, in 1832(Ort vor Zeit). He was only eight years old, but he had to work in the textilindustrie. The working conditions were very bad. Georgie and the other children had to work hard and it was dangerous for them. The factories were dirty and the machines were loud.
Georgie had to work 17 hours each day, so he hadn’t had enough time to sleep and he couldn’t spent time with friends. Sometimes he had to work even during the night so he missed the daylight.
One day he fell asleep. His master came and beat him up and he always kept a part of wages. Georgie was weak and his father had to carry him home. He was also too weak to eat and so Georgie went to bed. He slept until 4 o’clock then he thought that he had to go to work. But he couldn't. In this moment, he died.
This was the short life of the little boy Georgie who always went to work.


So, "must" wird in der Vergangneheit zu "had to".


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BeitragVerfasst am: 05 Apr 2008 - 13:43:29    Titel:

Vielen Dank für die superschnelle Antwort! Ich wollt eben nicht so oft had to schreiben und wusste nicht, dass man "must" in der Vergangenheit nicht benutzen DARF. Also noch mal vielen Dank und ein schönes Wochenende, wünsch ich dir =)
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BeitragVerfasst am: 05 Apr 2008 - 14:18:13    Titel:

BadPad hat folgendes geschrieben:
I want to write about child labour and the day the kids had. I’ll tell you the story of a boy who lived in this time.
Georgie Smith lived in Halifax, Britain, in 1832(Ort vor Zeit). He was only eight years old, but he had to work in the textileindustry. The working conditions were very bad. Georgie and the other children had to work hard and it was dangerous for them. The factories were dirty and the machines were loud.
Georgie had to work 17 hours each day, so he hadn't had enough time to sleep and he couldn't spend time with [his]friends. Sometimes he had to work even during the night so he missed the daylight.
One day he fell asleep. His master came and beat him up and he always kept a part of wages. Georgie was weak and his father had to carry him home. He was also too weak to eat and so Georgie went to bed. He slept until 4 o'clock then he thought that he had to go to work. But he couldn't. [alternatively "At" instead of "In"]In this moment, he died.
This was the short life of the little boy Georgie who always went to work.


So, "must" wird in der Vergangneheit zu "had to".


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BeitragVerfasst am: 05 Apr 2008 - 16:38:17    Titel:

Wouldn't "textilindustrie" be "textile industry"?
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BeitragVerfasst am: 06 Apr 2008 - 10:49:05    Titel:

oh ja das stimmt Embarassed
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