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BeitragVerfasst am: 01 Jun 2008 - 19:43:43    Titel: bitte korrektur meines kleinen textes =)

The picture shows a group of immigrants being greeted by an American. The American is surrounded by signs stressing the freedom of America, for example the reddish sky or the board with some information confirming the free life in America.
The immigrants come from all over the world,therefore from different cultures,clearly recognizable on the various clothes of the people, hoping for a better life in their self-determined refuge.
America is portrayed as an ark, where the immigrants want to leave behind their old life, which is full of dangers and problems as contrasted with the life in America, because there are no oppressive taxes, no expensive kings and among other things there is free lunch for everyone.
To draw a conclusion one could say that the immigrants hope for the American Dream coming true.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 02 Jun 2008 - 16:04:20    Titel: Re: bitte korrektur meines kleinen textes =)

boy_007 hat folgendes geschrieben:
The picture shows a group of immigrants being greeted by an American. The American is surrounded by signs stressing the freedom of America, for example the reddish sky or the board with some information confirming the free life in America.


The picture shows a group of immigrants being greeted by an American. The American is surrounded by signs stressing the freedom of American, such as the one with the reddish sky, or the board with information explaining the freedoms that American citizens enjoy.

Zitat:
The immigrants come from all over the world,therefore from different cultures,clearly recognizable on the various clothes of the people, hoping for a better life in their self-determined refuge.


The immigrants come from different cultures from all over the world, which is clearly recognizable from the various styles of clothes that the people are wearing; they are all hoping for a better life in their self-determined refuge.

Zitat:
America is portrayed as an ark, where the immigrants want to leave behind their old life, which is full of dangers and problems as contrasted with the life in America, because there are no oppressive taxes, no expensive kings and among other things there is free lunch for everyone.


Is there now ... uhh, anyway ...

In this picture, America is portrayed as an ark; the immigrants are hoping to leave behind their old life, which is filled with problems and dangers. This old life contrasts with the new American way of life, which is free of oppressive taxes, greedy monarchs and, amongst other things, there is a free lunch of everyone.

Zitat:
To draw a conclusion one could say that the immigrants hope for the American Dream coming true.


In conclusion, one could say that the immigrants are hoping that they too can realize the American dream.
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