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BeitragVerfasst am: 05 Dez 2008 - 22:29:26    Titel: bitte einmal verbessern? DANKE!

hallo,

es wäre wirklich super von euch wenn ihr folgenden text einmal nach grammatik und rechtschreibfehlern durchsuchen könntet.

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“Microsoft Windows Server 2003/ 2008” offers many important function or other worded many essential services which are required from a lot of companies today. One of the most important feature is the so called “Active Directory”. This kind of service is a common, uniform database which offers information about the resources in the network. Furthermore the administrator is able to control all network devices, central with the aid of the active directory. Because of this the amount of work will reduce ssharply.

sOther significant services and programs are the backup function , Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol and the cluster service: With the help of the backup program you can back up your whole system in different ways. So you are able to back up your files differential, incremental or you are able to protect your system with a full backup. The DHCP Service” allows you to cast automatically IP-address-information like gateway address, DNS and WINS address or for instance the subnet mask. This service saves time on the one hand and will help the administrator to avoid mistakes because all clients will get central and correct IP information. The cluster service is kind of server interconnection. So when one system crash another system will take the tasks and services of the incorrect server. Because of this these server role offers a maximum on
savailability and is very useful for exchange or sql server which are on of the most important systems in a company.

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BeitragVerfasst am: 06 Dez 2008 - 21:23:53    Titel:

keiner der helfen kann?

wo sind die ganzen englisch profis hin?

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BeitragVerfasst am: 07 Dez 2008 - 15:05:52    Titel:

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“Microsoft Windows Server 2003/ 2008” offers many important functions or, in other words, many essential services which are required from a lot of companies today. One of the most important features is the so-called “Active Directory”. This kind of service is a common, uniform database which offers information about the resources in the network. Furthermore, the administrator is able to control all network devices, central with the aid of the active directory. Because of this the amount of work will reduce sharply.


central with the aid....?

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Other significant services and programs are the backup function , Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol and the cluster service: With the help of the backup program you can back up your whole system in different ways. So you are able to back up your files differentially, incrementally or you are able to protect your system with a full backup. The DHCP Service” allows you to automatically cast IP-address-information like gateway addresses, DNS and WINS addresses or for instance the subnet mask. This service saves time on the one hand and will help the administrator avoid mistakes because all clients will get central and correct IP information. The cluster service is kind of server interconnection. So when one system crash another system will take the tasks and services of the incorrect server. Because of this these server role offers a maximum on
savailability and is very useful for exchange or sql server which are on of the most important systems in a company.


savailability?
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BeitragVerfasst am: 07 Dez 2008 - 18:41:24    Titel:

hi,

many thanks!

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savailability?of course you are right. there is a typing error.
the correct word is with out s.

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central with the aid....?
yes my dictionary says it is another expression to describe "with the help of"
or is this wrong?
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