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felix132
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BeitragVerfasst am: 23 Nov 2009 - 19:29:58    Titel: korrektur ..bitte

Hallo in meinem Text geht es darum was ein Staat machen kann, das die Auswanderung auf Grund poltischer Verfolgung verringert wird.....

ich bin leider nicht gut in Englisch und benötige deshalb etwas eure Unterstützung....

A second matter why many people went to other states is sadly because of political issues, they were persued by some racialist parties or similar organisations that do not want to leave the people allone. The refugees flee in other countries to be free and just wish to be independent of this problems, mostly are this people poor or are minorities the society. They do not have any chance to protect theirself. Finding of solutions for problems like this are the hardest duty which a state have to do. But nevertheless there are some ways to do it. The government for example is able to forbidd racial parties or pass laws which punish this racial guys who follow racial ideologies.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 23 Nov 2009 - 23:10:34    Titel:

A second reason why many people go to to other states is sadly because of political issues, they are pursued by some racialist parties or similar organisations which don't want them to be alone. The refugees flee to other countries to enjoy a better life and to independent and free from all of those problems. These people are mostly poor or belong to a minority of a social group. They do not have any chance to protect themselves. For the state it is a big problem and hard to solve. But nevertheless there are some ways to do it. For example the government is able to forbid racialist parties or pass laws by punishing them.



Hab versucht, auf Grammatik und Rechtschreibung zu achten.^^
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BeitragVerfasst am: 26 Nov 2009 - 11:26:52    Titel:

erkanyildirim hat folgendes geschrieben:
A second reason why many people go to to other states is sadly because of political issues, they are pursued by some racialist parties or similar organisations which don't want to leave this people alone ( Denke, es geht um unbehelligt,zufrieden lassen?) . The refugees flee to other countries to enjoy a better life and to be independent and free from all of those problems. Mostly, these people are poor or belong to a social minority They do not have any chance to protect themselves. For the government it is a big problem and hard to solve. But nevertheless there are some ways to do it. For example the government is able to forbid racialist parties or to pass laws inflicting a punishment on them.



Hab versucht, auf Grammatik und Rechtschreibung zu achten.^^
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