Englisch Referat - Grammatik korrekt?
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Jakomo
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 Verfasst am: 25 Feb 2012 - 19:10:53 Titel: Englisch Referat - Grammatik korrekt? |
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Hallo, Leute! Ich bin ganz neu hier im Forum & da ich ein englisches Referat über einen "unusual job" machen muss, stelle ich hier gleich mal eine Frage (ich hoffe, dass das hier das richtige Bereich ist).
Das Referat ist nicht lang, nur ca. 1-2 Minuten, also eher ein "Mini-Referat". Ich habe es bereits fertiggestellt, nur bin ich mir nicht 100% sicher, ob es von der Grammatik her richtig ist (die Rechtschreibung ist nicht wichtig).
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Hello, today I will tell you something about an unusual job. The job is called stuntman.
At first, it’s a very dangerous job. Because of the dangerous there aren’t very much stuntmen.
This job exists because most of the actors don’t want to make dangerous stunts on their own. So the need one, who looks like them and is brave enough to make dangerous things.
The main challenge for a stuntman is to double an actor. But he doesn’t double him the whole time only at dangerous stunts for example. Although it’s a very important job, because if there weren’t any stuntmen, there wouldn’t be much action in the films, most of the stuntmen aren’t famous.
In 1903 the demand for stuntmen began. The first stuntmen in the history of film was used in 1908 in the film "Der Graf". Because they needed a very good swimmer for the end of the film. This stuntman was a very good acrobat. He was ready to jump for five dollars off a cliff into the sea.
Since 2001 the World Stunt Academy awards annually the World Stunt Award for special stuntmen.
There are also some schools for people who want to become a stuntman.
Thanks for your attention.
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Falls einer mal schnell darüberschauen möchte & eventuell Fehler ausbessern würden, wäre ich sehr dankbar (falls noch wer zusätzliche Informationen hat, kann er diese gerne dazu schreiben).
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schnurzel91
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| Verfasst am: 26 Feb 2012 - 18:41:14 Titel: Re: Englisch Referat - Grammatik korrekt? |
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Hello, today I 'M GOING TO tell you something about an unusual job. The job is called stuntman.
FIRST, it’s a very dangerous job. Because of the DANGERS there aren’t very MANY stuntmen.
This job exists because most of the actors don’t want to make dangerous stunts THEMSELVES. So the need SOMEone who looks like them and is brave enough to DO dangerous things.
The main challenge for a stuntman is to ACT as a double for an actor. But he doesn’t DO THAT ALL THE TIME, but in dangerous stunts for example. ASO it’s a very important job, because if there weren’t any stuntmen, there wouldn’t be much action in the films.
most of the stuntmen aren’t famous.
In 1903 the demand for stuntmen began. The first stuntman in the history of film was used in 1908 in the film "Der Graf" because they needed a very good swimmer for the end of the film. This stuntman was a very good acrobat. He was ready to jump off a cliff into the sea for five dollars .
Since 2001 the World Stunt Academy HAS annually AWARDED the World Stunt Award for special stuntmen.
There are also some schools for people who want to become a stuntman.
Thanks for your attention.
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