|Verfasst am: 03 Jun 2012 - 15:47:36 Titel: Argumentation
ich muss am Dienstag dem 5.Juni 2012 eine Englischarbeit schreiben. Da es für mich wichtig ist, dass ich eine 3 schreibe(erste arbeit 5), würde ich mich freuen, wenn ihr diesen text Korrigieren könntet.
Danke schonmal im Vorraus.
Should less than 14 years old boys or girls be able to be in chat rooms?
In our present time, the Internet is one of the forceful and most used medium of the world. As a consequent it isn’t a wonder, that it transfix more and more younger generations. It makes a lot of fun to surf on the internet. There are nearly endless games, videos or other platforms. Very popular are the chat rooms, with it you can find friends all over the world and talk with them. But favorable kids aren’t knowing the huge dangerous in them and the parents couldn’t look up to them all the time. Therefore I want to discuss if under 14 years old kids are allowed to join this chats.
On the one hand there are worried parents.
On the Internet are a lot of dangerous and traps.
The first point we mention is, that the kids can’t know with whom they chat. It is to easy to fake his/her profile, just set a wrong older and uploaded a failure picture. Furthermore they use the gullibility of the children to meet. And if it is a pedophile God have a mercy on them. Moreover there is everywhere advertisement and universally there lurk treaties. They use the gullibility of the kids, too. They blink and have interesting headings. Zap, they click on it. Simply enter the E-mail address or cell numbers which may have to be fulfilled and then the parents get a bill about 100$. If the parents want to control them, they couldn’t do it, because there are to many providers, which work with different Scripts. But a lot of parents don’t want to control their children and they just advised them against the advertisements, but they get hidden so good that it doesn’t get scarcely anything. At least but not last I want to mention that they can addicted by those rooms. And then they just chat with their virtual friends and they don’t play outside with the real friends.
On the other hand there are mainly teens.
The Internet is already 40 years after his discovery the populates medium. This is the reason we have the opinion if the kids tackle with it early, they will have a big advantage in school. To the point that they meet each other on an easy way with a pedophile, sounds after worried parents. Your kids aren’t silly and they are clarifying very early about the dangerous and often they know more about the websites than their parents. Besides they don’t meet everybody, who contacts them. Quite often these persons have a suspicious effect on the children. And to the point with the advertisement, I can defuse, too. Maybe they click on it, but extremely rare they enter their cell number or E-mail address, because they know the dangerous. They hear it everywhere and remember this facts. The last point you mention is the addiction of chat rooms. The kids just want to have fun and want to satisfy one’s curiosity. This is the reason it is interesting to find virtual friends in other cultures. But this interest gets out very fast. Also the parents can say that they have to get off the computer after one or two hours. Moreover, what can do kids if it rain outside? They can visit a virtual world with their real friends.
Furthermore it can be a good feeling to be anonymous. Because on the internet nobody has prejudice against somebody. This is very important for kids who were mobbed in school.
Cause of the endless arguments of both sides I want to cut a long story short.
In my opinion kids under 14 are allowed to visit this chat rooms, but maybe there must be some law against the advertisement, and maybe some people, who search for the pedophile.