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BeitragVerfasst am: 06 Mai 2006 - 09:34:08    Titel: Übersetzung:(

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Kann vielleicht mal jemand über meine Übersetzung gucken?! Ich hab echt mein bestes versuchtt! Ich wäre euch wirklich wahnsinnig dankbarrr!!!!

On 1 September 1659. Robinson Crusoe went on board with its crew. Then it drove with its crew to Africa. Reason of the travel was the trade with the Africans. With the South American coast an gale damaged its ship and it had into it had with a life raft of far paddles.
Then the gale tilted the boat and all this is died except Robinson. With last strength schwom it to an island. At the first night it sleeps on a tree, because it had fear of wild animals. On the next day he saw its ship that fortunately did not sink. It schwom over there to the ship and got all vital things. A tent broke open, and brought all its goods into the tent and slept. Robinson is already a whole year on the island. He works on all days except Sunday. Then he tinkered a calendar around to know which date today is. Afterwards it built itself around a small mountain with a cave at the summit a fortress. Robinson made itself furniture from wood. From the tallow of wild goats it made itself small Lämmchen. Then full it rice. He investigated the island. From fear which it possesses no more gun powder comes it on the idea the wild goats to breed, instead of hunting and shoot it. Since then Robinson on the island stranded, is already two years ago.
Robinson did not know when enemies would emerge therefore bound it for its dog a mesh and a whom enemies would then emerge should the dog bark. It had already a whole field full rice and other grain however it knew not which it to make should thereby the birds its grain not to eat. It decided to go on the hunt with its gun. As it on the way was already came a bird swarm and it tore it the grain from the earth outside. Robinson turned and shot at the bird swarm and it settled three birds.

Robinson hung all three birds on a Type around bread to bake needed it a pot. That was not to be built so simply with loam and sand. Finally it created it. Around the necessary it to lend burned it hardens the pot. The pot became red like a brick. Fourth year he had found a new occupation beside the harvest. Ship build. It created a ship to build however it could not the ship not in the water bring. On the island it was hot. There Robinson imagined which it an umbrella builds. First tries are skin-struck. But it had a screen build which one up and make can, otherwise last the screen torn because of the many plants. Afterwards Robinson built a screen from skin which one at rainy and sunny days use itself can. Later Robinson drove around the whole island with a small ship which it built. Robinson bred besides the wild goats. The only nature with the Robinson eats is its dog. After fifteen years Robinson looks in such a way: It did not carry a shapeless hat with a Fetzen on the neck thereby it sun fire kriegt.
It carried still another shirt and trousers which it in-lubricated, and still another few Stiefeletten. All this consisted of goat skin. On one day Robinson saw footprints of humans frightened it. He found a fire place to humans was fed from Wilderern. After six ten years on the island Robinsons dog died. On the three-and-twentieth year on the island Robinson did not see the Wilderer for the first time however it saw it. At the night Robinson bone of humans saw those the Wilderer had eaten. It could not sleep six ten months calmly. But Robinson saw a ship and all humans there was death, except a dog, there carried forward it also pair of in other things. Further two years passed. Robinson saw the Wilderer around a fire danced. There at one time still two Wilderer came. The one one killed and one ate, but the other one fled. He was pursued immediately. Robinson climbed from its castle around the Wilderer to save. It saved the Wilderer. Robinson gave it the name Friday. At the night Robinson sleeps in the mountain and Friday outside. Robinson had fear of the Wilderern and built itself a Türe. It caught English at him to teach. Robinson could place already a great many asking to Friday. Thus it experienced Friday on the mainland lived, and sometimes the Spaniards come on the island. Friday told over its God and Robinson over its. Two years passed and Friday could already very well English. Robinson wanted to build a boat with Friday. He asked Friday for it which it it good trees too finds. After one month finished product they. When they want straight away rudders, they saw the Wilderer at one time. The Wilderer ate humans, but two others saved them. Coincidentally Friday saw its father in a Kanu bound. It freed it and gave it somewhat to eat and drink. One week later called Friday to Robinson: , I saw a ship. From the ship into a boat ten armed men and three prisoners come. Robinson freed the prisoners and the others shot it, or he took her in shank. One of the prisoners was a captain of the ship. Afterwards still ten men with weapons and they came also arose. On the ship still six ten men remain. Robinson and the captain had a plan like them the ship to back-conquer. As Robinson that heard the captain the ship had conquered much it nearly in faint. Afterwards Robinson leads away on 19 December 1686 from the island. It left some prisoners on the island from fear before the Meuterei.Robinson to them erklehrt as one on the island had survived. Robinson had taken still another bird named polling with. On 11 June 1686 Robinson reached its homeland England. As it arrived there believed all it lasts dead. All its relatives are dead except the widow of its friend Robinson donate their money. Robinson decided to drive to Portugal.
There it received from its captain which it it money owes. There it experienced also that its Plantage in Brazil well runs. Robinson is enriches one. He swears which it fifty pieces of gold the son of the captain gives annually and who captain one hundred annually. In Lisbon Robinson finds the widow of its friend and from his friend two sisters. It gives them all money. He gave to the monastery and the needy the money. Robinson gave its acquaintance a gift or a money to all. It decided to tear to England. On that away there it with Friday and still four along travelers had one dangerously begegnug with wolves. It sold its Plantage in Brazil because, there all is killed those not catholic is. Robinson sends its nephews on the ship. Robinson marries and gets two boys and a girl. He buys a house and fields.
Whom its wife dies makes herself ready it on the island to sails. As it made itself finished took it on its travels the island a barrel binder, a Carpenter and one forges. It carried forward still another alive cow and an alive pig. On away to the island it saved sixty-four men from a ship fire. The island was with difficulty to find because, Robinson at that time no map with had. As Robinson with Friday the island reached finds to Friday its father. The Spaniards told them of the last ten years: There were one battlebattle battle and two fights with the Spaniards and Englishmen. With the second fight the Englishmen left the island and drove to the mainland.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 06 Mai 2006 - 10:15:25    Titel:

Ich seh da keine Übersetzung, nur einen englischen Text... Wenn das die Übersetzung sein soll dann solltest du auch den deutschen Originaltext angeben. (Wobei ich mal davon ausgehe, dass der englische Text das Original sein dürfte.)
EDIT: OK, hab jetzt mal den Text ein wenig gelesen. Das ist wohl echt die Übersetzung, aber so schlecht, dass da sicher babelfish oder sowas am Werk war... Rolling Eyes
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BeitragVerfasst am: 06 Mai 2006 - 10:25:12    Titel:

Oh mein Gott!
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So einen scheiß brauchst du hier nicht reinstellen.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 06 Mai 2006 - 10:43:04    Titel:

In welcher Klasse bist du denn?
Ein kleiner Tipp - du musst Texte (besonders solche Nacherzählungen und Geschichten) nicht wortwörtlich übersetzen, schreib sie so um, dass sie sich gut formuliert anhören.


[quote]On September 1st, 1659 Robinson Crusoe "boarded" a ship with his crew. Then the ship took him and his crew to Africa. (The) Reason of this journey were the trade relations with the Africans. Nearby the South American coast a gale damaged their ship (könnte auch "their ship was damaged by a gale" sein)
>>and it had into it had with a life raft of far paddles.<< das ergibt irgendwie keinen sinn mehr

kannst du auch mal die deutsche version reinstellen, aus der du übersetzt hast?

je nachdem, für welchen jahrgang und welche schulform das ist musst du eventuell noch einiges tun


keien garantie Razz
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BeitragVerfasst am: 06 Mai 2006 - 15:13:35    Titel:

Wo ist hier denn was übersetzt??? Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad
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BeitragVerfasst am: 07 Mai 2006 - 17:57:25    Titel:

Ingo3142 hat folgendes geschrieben:
Oh mein Gott!
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So einen scheiß brauchst du hier nicht reinstellen.

Und du nicht solche Beiträge verfassen. Rolling Eyes
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BeitragVerfasst am: 07 Mai 2006 - 20:08:55    Titel:

hmpf.. wenn ichs mir anschaue (hab mir nich alles durchgelesen, nur lediglich den anfang.. danach war's mir schon zu viel)

dann würd ich sagen: du solltest mal echt noch etwas üben!!
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BeitragVerfasst am: 07 Mai 2006 - 20:22:52    Titel:

Kommt drauf an wie alt sie ist, in welchem Schuljahr sie ist usw.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 07 Mai 2006 - 20:36:07    Titel:

nun ich würde sagen..

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