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BeitragVerfasst am: 03 Mai 2009 - 01:47:43    Titel:

Recommendations (made) by alumni of international business schools or universities.

Zum Apprentice (oder apprenticeship), das hängt also von den Wörtern ab...

Carpenter's apprentice
apprentice carpenter
carpentry apprentice
carpentry apprenticeship

software coding apprentice
baking apprenticeship

etc.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 03 Mai 2009 - 13:58:17    Titel:

Ich bin Tischlerlehrling= I am apprentice carpenter
or I am a trainee carpenter

Ich bin Auszubildener(Lehrling) = I am an apprentice

Ausbildung = training,apprenticeship
Ich mache eine Lehre zum Schlosser= I do an apprenticeship as a locksmith,carpenter etc

Gesellenbrief= apprenticeship certificate
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BeitragVerfasst am: 09 Mai 2009 - 16:00:54    Titel: Korrekturlesen

habe einen sehr langen Englischen text!! kann mir einer den Korrekturlesen?
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BeitragVerfasst am: 09 Mai 2009 - 16:37:44    Titel:

Wie lang soll „sehr lang” heißen?
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BeitragVerfasst am: 10 Mai 2009 - 15:00:11    Titel:

Persia hat folgendes geschrieben:
so 14 Seiten reiner Text


Na los..Schmeiß rein

Toss it in
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BeitragVerfasst am: 06 Sep 2009 - 13:56:25    Titel: Bitte Grammatik+Rs prüfen :) DANKE:)

Summary chapter 12 "Ragtime" by E. L. Doctorow
After the socialist meeting where Emma Goldman had taken a speech,
Tateh sits one night and one day in his flat neither eating nor saying something. As he looks at his daughter he thinks of the strokes of fate which will destroy the beauty of her.
The way the little girl prepares their meals reminds Tateh of Mameh and he can't suffer this situations anymore so he packs their baggage and they left the two-room apartment.
Tateh and Sha take the streetcars to the terminals. Tateh calculates that they can travel with their 30$ until Boston using this cheap way. At the border of New York they get the knowledge that they have to wait till sunrise for the next streetcar so they sleed in a band shell. As they arrive in New Rochelle the little girl observes a boy who crosses they way holding hands with his mother. Sha can't get her eyes of him.
As Tateh and Sha arrive in New Haven they sleep in a rooming house and before they have their breakfast in the dining room Tateh and Sha take their best clothes to don't stand out. On their way to Springfield Tateh notices that the streetcar is crossing the village in which he grew up. He remembers that he loved all the carts in his childhood. Tateh thinks for the first time since his arrival in the USA that Springfield could be a village to live in.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 12 Sep 2009 - 22:53:45    Titel: Re: Bitte Grammatik+Rs prüfen :) DANKE:)

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Summary chapter 12 "Ragtime" by E. L. Doctorow
After the socialist meeting where Emma Goldman had given a speech,
Tateh sits for one night and one day in his flat, neither eating nor saying anything. As he looks at his daughter he thinks of the strokes of fate which will destroy her beauty.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 29 Sep 2009 - 21:41:25    Titel:

huhu kann mir jemand helfen ich habe einen englischen text zum thema "Kann die Natur sich irgendwann rächen" geschrieben kann jemand mir helfen und das korrektur lesen ich bin echt ne niete in englisch wäre echt lieb^^

nicht erschrecken wenns so viel ist^^

Are we blame for, when the earth do not exist someday? We and our action have accomplished, that the nature revenge for all what we have done. Today there are indications of such a phenomenon. For Example in the media is known, where animals and planes attacke humans in the tropical rain forest without any reason. Is this the imagination of humans or the natur begins to oppose us.
I should like to begin with the consequenses of a revenge nature. Almost every day you hear something about enviromental katastrophys. Some of them can not be explained. They can be seen as a revenge of nature. There were two tsunamis at the dates 26.12.2004 in indian ocean and 21.05.2003 before algeria. Tousand of familys with children die. Nobody know from where the wave came. However it is difficult to say whether tsunamis, hurricans and tornados have something to do with this fact. Researcher have to localize devices to get informations about enviromental katastrophys. But all phenomenons can not explained.
An other important facts are volcanic eruptions, earthquakes, fire and comets. In america are four or more earthquakes, yearly. In my opinion this things are acts of nature. So many people die. I say there are so many statemants. For example she is influenced by mining and geothermal energy. People should warn about danger, but nobody can stop such an attack. If nature would really attacke the humans, we can do nothing. On the one hand, the earth would find her old structure,on the other hand that is the end of human being.
Other consequenses and indictions for revenge of nature are floods. They are caused by the global warming. The CFCs of car are the main point of destroying the ozon layer. They are responsible that the netherlands are disappeared in the year 2050. I assume that the idea has a connection of human being and nature acting. This support the view that the facts are these results were done by people. The nature does the rest.
To illustrate this you need only look at the reasons, why the nature should revenge.
So I can see a parallel between human failor and the consequences. War, pollution, gene manipulation and other very bad things cause that nature acts so. The people have not realizied how the earth is broken. (Only one big katastrophy of nature in the future and she has one´s revenge) I give you an example for gene manipulation. Someday the researchers will discover a virus which can kill anything. This virus come outside and spread around the world. So it shows the humanity could die in less minutes.
In the end I want say something about predictions fort he future. There is a maya calender in the internet which says that the earth life ends in 2012. In view of the fact that I do not believe say the descendants of mayas the nature kill the earth. For example with a tidal wave or a comet support down to earth. Therefore I think the nature has something like a soul. She knows what is going on earth. I disagree with the idea to punish the acts of human. They should only instruct. So it is possible that the nature revenge someday.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 03 Okt 2009 - 19:52:20    Titel:

Helpless305 hat folgendes geschrieben:


If (when wird verwendet, wenn die Zeit eine Rolle spielt, es aber sicher ist, dass das Ereignis auch eintreten wird; if wird verwendet, wenn eine Bedingung vorrausgesetzt wird) the earth didn't exist anymore, would we be the ones to be blamed? (Zeit beachten! 2. If-Satz, da Eintreten eher unwahrscheinlich ist: if-clause: simple past, main clause: conditional)


We and our actions have caused nature to take revenge for everything we have done.

Nowadays, there are indications for such a phenomenon.

For Example, we know by the media , animwhere animals and planes attacke humans in the tropical rain forest without any reason. Is this the imagination of humans or the natur begins to oppose us.


I'd (should entweder should oder 'd like to; beides geht nicht) like to point out the consequences of a revenging nature.

Almost every day you hear about enviromental catastrophes; some of them can not be explained. They can be seen as a revenge of nature. There have been two tsunamis on December 26th 2004: One in the Indian Ocean, the other one at the coast of Algeria.

Thousands of families with children died.

Nobody knows,where the wave came from.

However, it is hard to say, whether tsunamis, hurricans and tornados have something to do with this fact. Researchers have to localize(meinst du put?) devices to get information (immer ohne s!) about enviromental catastrophes.

But all phenomenons can not be explained.


Other important facts are volcanic eruptions, earthquakes, fire and comets. In America, there are approximately four earthquakes per year / per annum.

In my opinion those occurences are acts of nature. So many people died.


Die andere Hälfte folgt morgen noch. Das nächste Mal bitte Absätze einfügen, this way, it's just a pain in the arse. Wink

LG
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Edit: Besteht noch Bedarf an der Korrektur des 2. Teils?
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